Another try at rendering my very own Asari model, Vita. I completely redid the skin, as I was rather unsatisfied with my precedent render result, the skin was too plain, blurred and definitely not as asar-ish as it is now. It took me two whole days to get the desired result, but I really think this time it was worth it. I hope you like her as much as I do x3
God bless Bioware, Mass Effect and ASARI
This is NOT an original model, it has been created from scratch using DAZ Studio's V4.
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It is a nice texture. And also a nice, tasteful shot.
A lot of people bandy the term "artistic nude" around a bunch, I think this is actually it. Beautiful, without being outright sexy. Also, dimply skin. you know, like asari.
Cutieeeee! Those Asari species reminds me a bit of the female Zoras from Zelda, I'm the only one? D= lol it's beautiful, I love her eyes. It's like she is really alive. And that scales detail covering all her skin Awesome work.
(yes, a little. co's Zoras has a HUGE head lol). Asari looks better, and cuter, prettier *losing her mind as always* x3 lol It's my pleasure baby, your works deserve that!
I don't know how difficult that would be from the designer's POV, so ignore these comments if they're going to give You too much trouble From the anatomical point of view, I'd change that texture on her breasts to smaller "scales" (or however we're supposed to call it) Skin on woman's breasts is very thin and delicate, so the texture should represent that. I'd make the "scales" bigger on her arms, though, and if it;s possible, make it a little more irregular. Right now her arms look a little like wrapped in bubble foil to me One last bit: the texture on her face could be a little softer - I don't know how You can achieve it from technical point of view, but if You could make it softer and "more inviting to touch", she'd be perfect Overall, don't get me wrong, I am amazed with this model - I love her face, her eyes (so natural!) the shading on her body... but You required feedback and I'm doing my best to provide that! Good luck with future work on her, she's really lovely
First of all, thank you for taking the time to actually give me feedback, unfortunately often enough people just fave and forget ^^ so thank you for not being one of them
I will surely make treasure with all the precious feedback you gave me for her skin, I'll definitely apply your suggestions with my next render with her, so you will see how it will look like and, eventually, tell me what to fix
Thank you for your kindness, I am so happy other people like my work
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